In the humanity class we had to make an imovie with a partner. My partner was Sarah and My pharaoh was King Tut. My partner was a hard worker she worked really hard for the imovie comparing to me. She answered all three question. And also she tried to look for pictures.

She is a hard worker and if I were a teacher I will give her an A+.

She even helped on my work although she is done with hers and she didn't need to if she didn't wanted. I will try to work harder and help her if I and her gets partner again.

Yu Ern and Tem - Tutankhamun

They had a nice introduction. But how ever I wasn’t sure for the first part. Also other thing that they need to work on is choosing the background because at the background I could hear some noises from the background. Which made me and all the classmates to get confuse what you guys were saying in the video. Also another thing to improve on is to order the information in the orders that happened. Finally, you guys could have make the video more interesting by putting more transition between the pictures and making the script more funnier. The rest of the video was good and I could see that you guys have worked on it hard.

Justin-Pasha Khufu

I liked how Justin and Pasha have made their imovie but there were some problems that they had to work on. They had some of the grammar mistakes in their script also they had to make the voice clear. But they had few great things such as pictures and using the tone and pitch to make the voice more interesting.

Ashika and Alvin - Nefertiti

The introduction was fine but there were some mistakes that they have to work on. They didn’t have a lot of facts about Nefertiti but they had more facts about Ancient Egypt. Also there are supposed to have when the pharaoh have ruled but they didn’t have. Also they were talking too fast and not clearly. So I think they need to practice more before they record. They need to put some more transitions. Other parts were good.

Maria and Andrea - Ramses II

The introduction tells about when Ramses II have ruled so the introduction is good. The pictures matches the script, their voices were clear, information were interesting. They knew what monument Ramses II had statue for his monument. But they didn’t put the information and pictures in the order. Also I liked how they have another funny video of Ramses II.